Thirteen Nights of Dreaming: Edit

After the feedback in crit today I decided to change the colors and placement of the title for this piece. I still enjoy the sepia of the earlier piece but a lot of people felt it was reading as dirt or underground and not dream-like patterning. I do enjoy the blue of the cups in the new edit--it has a cooler feel to it.


Sam Gauss said...

I like the sepia, too, but I think the blue definitely suits it better - gives it a more ethereal feel. Nice work :)

Abigail Shaw said...

I like the changes you made, especially the type change. It really helps frame the piece.